2014年上海中考英語(yǔ)范文

2014年上海中考英語(yǔ)范文
 

This time next year

Time flows like running water. At this very moment next year, frankly speaking, I will definitely finish my final exam during my first year in senior high school and start my journey in an ideal place :Phuket Island.
As a keen traveller, what attracts me most is travelling for the reason that travelling can expand my horizons and enrich my life. Moreover, the clean atmosphere, the closeness to nature, gentle pace of living and twittering of birds in Phuket Island will exactly leave me a deep impression. Last but not least, the unique south-east Asian food and friendly people will enable me to acquire the fantastic local culture and customs there.
It is travelling that will benefit me this time next year. Never will I forget this valuable and memorable experience.
 

作文分析：
1. Time flows like running water. 時(shí)光飛逝，用語(yǔ)獨(dú)具一格。

2. frankly speaking 動(dòng)名詞作插入語(yǔ)，非常恰如其分。

3. At this very moment next year 用詞貼切，very顯得非常原汁原味。

4. start my journey 開(kāi)啟一段旅程，照應(yīng)下文的travelling。

5. As a keen traveller 表達(dá)非常地道，符合英美國(guó)家的語(yǔ)言思維。
 

6. what attracts me most is travelling for the reason that travelling can expand my horizon and enrich my life. 表語(yǔ)從句嵌套原因狀語(yǔ)從句，體現(xiàn)對(duì)于不同從句爐火純青的運(yùn)用。
 

7. Moreover, the clean atmosphere, the closeness to nature, gentle pace of living and twittering of birds in Phuket Island will exactly leave me a deep impression. 四大平行結(jié)構(gòu)大氣上檔次。leave me a deep impression 靈活巧妙運(yùn)用考綱詞匯。
 

8. acquire the fantastic local culture and customs there 了解當(dāng)?shù)胤浅０舻奈幕�和�?xí)俗。雙c用得恰如其分。
 

9. It is travelling that will benefit me this time next year. 強(qiáng)調(diào)句的合理運(yùn)用。
 

10. Never will I forget this valuable and memorable experience. 倒裝句用得滴水不漏。 valuable和memorable 押尾韻，體現(xiàn)了較強(qiáng)的駕馭英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言的能力。