2015上海中考英語作文3例范文（附加分亮點(diǎn)分析）(2)

 

　　I want to invent a time machine

 

　　As a student who is experiencing unprecedented modern life nowadays, I would rather learn about the history and the future life of human being from a real experience than learn from a textbook. That’s why if I can work as a great inventor, inventing a time machine will be my first choice. The most important usage of my time machine will be visiting one of best schools in Tang Dynasty. As we all know, Tang Dynasty is famous for its open-minded education. Therefore, when I visit the school of the ancient city, I can not only try different ways of studying but communicate with people from different countries as well. Using a time machine is the most vivid way to learn history as it is both a record of mankind and a mirror of past, I am looking forward to the day when my time machine comes out. 

 

　　—新東方優(yōu)能中考英語郭娟老師

 

　　精彩亮點(diǎn)分析：

 

　　亮點(diǎn)一：定語從句修飾對孩子現(xiàn)在的生活

 

　　亮點(diǎn)二：用wouldrather…than…表達(dá)孩子的意愿

 

　　亮點(diǎn)三：用if條件狀語從句表達(dá)主題

 

　　亮點(diǎn)四：befamousfor因…而

 

　　亮點(diǎn)五：notonly…but…aswell不但…而且…

 

　　亮點(diǎn)六：用動名詞詞組做主語

 

　　亮點(diǎn)七：用idiom突出歷史的重要性

 

　　亮點(diǎn)八：定語從句表達(dá)孩子的期待

 

 

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