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一、措詞毛病(Troubles in Diction)
Diction 是指在特定句子中如何適當(dāng)?shù)剡x用詞語(yǔ)的問(wèn)題,囿于教學(xué)時(shí)間緊迫,教師平時(shí)在這方面花的時(shí)間往往極其有限,影響了孩子在寫(xiě)作中沒(méi)有養(yǎng)成良好的推敲、斟酌的習(xí)慣。他們往往隨心所欲,拿來(lái)就用。所以作文中用詞不當(dāng)?shù)腻e(cuò)誤比比皆是。
病句:The increasing use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution.
(農(nóng)業(yè)方面化學(xué)物質(zhì)使用的不斷增加也造成了污染。)
剖析:顯然,考生把obstacles“障礙、障礙物”誤作substance“物質(zhì)”了。另外“the increasing use(使用的不斷增加)”應(yīng)改為“abusive use(濫用)”。
改為:The abusive use of chemical substances in agriculture also causes/leads to pollution.
二、累贅(Redundancy)
言以簡(jiǎn)潔為貴。寫(xiě)句子沒(méi)有一個(gè)多余的詞;寫(xiě)段落沒(méi)有一個(gè)無(wú)必要的句子。能用單詞的不用詞組;能用詞組的不用從句或句子。
病句1:In spite of the fact that he is lazy, I like him.
剖析:本句的“the fact that he is lazy”系同謂語(yǔ)從句,我們按照上述“能用詞組的不用從句”。
改為:In spite of his laziness, I like him.
病句2:For the people who are diligent and kind, money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need.
剖析:整個(gè)句子可以大大簡(jiǎn)化。
改為:Diligent, caring people use money only to buy what they need.
三、不連貫(Incoherence)
不連貫是指一個(gè)句子前言不對(duì)后語(yǔ),或是結(jié)構(gòu)上不暢通。這也是考生常犯的毛病。
病句:The fresh water, it is the most important things of the earth.
剖析:The fresh water 與逗號(hào)后的it 不連貫。It 與things 在數(shù)方面不一致。
改為:Fresh water is the most important thing in the world.
四、綜合性語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤(Comprehensive Misusage)
所謂“綜合性語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤”,是指除了上述錯(cuò)誤以外,還有諸如時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)、大小寫(xiě)等方面的錯(cuò)誤。
病句:Today, Money to everybody is very importance, our's eat, cloth, live, go etc.
可改為:Today money is very important for everybody to live in the world.
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